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Post by ~the blue screen of death on Feb 26, 2010 22:54:12 GMT
Hmm? I suppose you're right, Sky, but remember that Byakuran's actually quite powerful in the manga anyway...
What about we just get rid of the part about his weapon? That suggestion was because Nyght asked me 'what weapon should [byakuran] have?'...
The history's all there to explain away his personality...it's overkill...
Hurr, shucks.
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Post by « Nyghtvision » on Feb 26, 2010 22:58:03 GMT
Oh. Come on. My fault? Sheesh, all I did was ask to see if you had any suggestions or not.
OK, OK, I'll just remove the gun bit. Then let's see if the other admins approve or something.
Pfft.
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Post by ~the blue screen of death on Feb 26, 2010 22:59:23 GMT
But I didn't say it was your fault...D:
Puu, I'm sorry?
(also, shall shut up now.)
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Post by C.C. on Feb 26, 2010 23:51:47 GMT
...I recognise Saz's writing style in this! *is shot* xDD Did she suggest some of the abilities as well, or am I just over-paranoid? I think we should remove the gun too ^-^
Okay. Down to business.
First of all, you haven't mentioned what happened to Byakuran in university. (This may be Saz's fault, because she's not up to date). But in uni, he met Shouichi of that time, and the TYE Shouichi was accidentally bazooka'd into two different Parallel Worlds. Byakuran saw the first Shouichi (In Parallel World I) and seemed to remember something about this Shouichi (In Parallel World II).
And that's how he realized about Parallel Worlds.
Okay, I fail at explaining. But if anyone's read the chapter, they'll probably know what I'm talking about. Honestly not my fault, because Saz said to include everything from TYE to 7YE. Her fault, really.
Ah, I found Wiki's explanation on the Parallel worlds thing, in case people are still unclear:
'Revealed by Shoichi in chapter 252, Byakuran met Shoichi's younger self many times after Shoichi came into possession of shells for the 10 Year Bazooka. However, his ability to see into parallel worlds was awakened as a result of the same Shoichi from the past meeting two different Byakurans of the future. With this ability, Byakuran was able to use knowledge from different parallel worlds to become ruler of each of them. '
A-Also, you forgot the Parallel World thing in his Abilities section.
And...Although the history sounds remarkably like B-sama's that should be all ^-^
(I'm sorry?) [/color] |
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Post by ~the blue screen of death on Feb 27, 2010 0:05:23 GMT
Oh, thanks.[/sarcasm]
Then do you have any bright ideas? I used all mine up for everything else, and my muse is currently playing around with a new fanfiction idea. Typing at about 10PM is kind of...sleep-deprived goodness, don't you think? ==
But ok, ok...I'll add it in for her now or smth. Need the him-discovering-parallel-worlds thing, though. I forgot about that in my planning.
Guhhhh.....
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Post by C.C. on Feb 27, 2010 1:08:29 GMT
Well, actually, I was always under the impression that Byakuran was a normal student before he met Shou-chan. And is he the 10th or the 1st Gesso Boss? O.o? xD
You also need to include his weird blood ability as well...
And wow, the Shou section was incredibly small O.o xD [/color] |
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Post by ~the blue screen of death on Feb 27, 2010 21:04:55 GMT
............Excuse me whilst I headbash in a nearby corner.
*headbashes*
Gaaaaahhhhh, I keep forgetting these things. Thanks for pointing them out. I think...I might hand it back over to Nyght or so...I'M SORRY I FAILED YOUUUUU but you see I was using yet another variant of my fanfiction...
OTL
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Post by C.C. on Mar 1, 2010 6:14:55 GMT
Okay. You might want to elaborate on the Shouichi part (and actually call him by his actual name, may I mention!) and also add the stuff in the latest chapter into his abilities? Or you could leave it out, I'm not that fussy.
But the appearance section hasn't been done yet, so tell me when it's complete? (Yes, you do actually have to fill out stuff other than height and weight) [/color] |
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Post by « Nyghtvision » on Mar 2, 2010 7:41:54 GMT
Well, I'm finally back after an eternity of homework, and...*squints at profile* I think...Saz was right. It is overkill.......
I'm filling in the appearance part now. I kept it blank to do later, but I think Saz thought I was done...
Elaborate? Oh, ok. Doing it nowish...Oh Saz, what have you done now? -________-b
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Post by « Nyghtvision » on Mar 2, 2010 10:00:41 GMT
It's fixed now...and this isnt 5 words yet...
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Post by C.C. on Mar 3, 2010 9:19:03 GMT
A-Ano, Nyght-san! The rest of the profile looks really good ^^ And your picture is really nice, too! But the appearance text section needs to be slightly larger. Uh, like, you didn't describe what he wore, or his Mare Ring ^^ If you can make it one long paragraph, or two short paragraphs, it would be nice!
If you're stuck, you might want to check the other approved profiles to see what I mean ^^ [/color] |
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Post by « Nyghtvision » on Mar 6, 2010 8:20:45 GMT
Um, I've added more to is like you said...would it be okay now? (^^  Sorry for all the trouble...m(_ _)m |
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Post by C.C. on Mar 6, 2010 8:41:41 GMT
No trouble at all ^-^ Yup, it looks about fine now! I shall call it...
Approved!
...Unless someone else wanted to approve it...xD [/color] |
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Post by ~the blue screen of death on Mar 6, 2010 9:28:44 GMT
FFFFFF, CC; your code is dead! Don't worry, I'll fix it! but really, {size=3}{/s}?
But Nyght; it looks good. Great drawing too, by the way -- keep practicing, it does make perfect~!
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Post by C.C. on Mar 7, 2010 3:44:48 GMT
Shut it. You'd have mistakes too if you were coding every post =PPP *is shot* Ow... |
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